Landscape as Metaphor
Keeping Things Whole
In a field
I am the absence
of field.
This is
always the case.
Wherever I am
I am what is missing.
When I walk
I part the air
and always
the air moves in
to fill the spaces
where my body’s been.
We all have reasons
for moving.
I move
to keep things whole.
— Mark Strand
I have absence on my mind. A sort of seamlessness. Land meets sky with no distinction. Someone called this blur an ordinary loneliness.
Somewhere is a center, then a horizon as a single grounding line — of fence or hill or endlessness — holding us in or keeping us out. I'm not sure which.
As often happens, I discover a poem that holds what I feel but can't articulate. Poem as map, as landmark, as grounding and center. Thank you Mark.
Tell me, what's in your (emotional, physical, mental) landscape?
Reader Comments (3)
I am longing for “the new green of spring” and see a bit of it in the leafless trees today. Thanks for asking.
I love that last line.
Ann -- I like your ability to "see." :)
Lisa -- I like it too: "I move to keep things whole."
Thanks for reading & responding.