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Thursday
Mar012012

Thankful Thursday: Read and Misread

Everything Lush I Know

I do not know the names of things
but I have lived on figs and grapes
smell of dirt under moon
and moon under threat of rain
everything lush I know
an orchard becoming all orchards
flowers here and here
the earth I have left
every brief home-making
the lot of God blooming into vines
right now then and always

— Kimberly Burwick

 

As part of my new routine of reading and writing each morning, yesterday I read this poem from Horses in the Cathedral, by Kimberly Burwick, a writer living in Moscow, Idaho.

Despite its brevity, the poem is full, and well, lush. That first line is an immediate hook — I do not know the names of things — and the reverent details and tone transported me easily from the poem to my journal. Energized, I lifted a line — a lot of God blooming into vines — and started a freewrite.

This prompt produced pages of material. Later, I reread the poem and realized it was not a lot of God but the lot of God. But no matter, whatever unfurls the mind and moves the pen.

On this Thankful Thursday, I am thankful for poems that arrive and energize.

 

It's Thankful Thursday, a weekly pause to appreciate the people, places, things (and poems) in our lives. Joy contracts and expands in proportion to our gratitude. What makes your world expand?


Reader Comments (4)

*I think the insurance industry is incredibly corrupt, but I'm still grateful to be insured.

*Free lunch

*Pay raises (even tiny ones; it adds up!)

*Taking on new responsibilities at work, and learning new skills.

*My husband making me a baked potato for dinner last night and cutting it into the shape of a heart. It was adorable.

March 1, 2012 | Unregistered CommenterAllyson

Allyson,
Bless your husband's heart-shaped potato love, and you, for showing up grateful every time.

With appreciation,
Drew

March 1, 2012 | Unregistered CommenterDrew

What a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing it.

I'm late to the Thankful Thursday party again, but I'm thankful that our house hunt is over, and I feel so lucky to have enough of everything we really need: food, warmth, shelter.

March 2, 2012 | Unregistered CommenterMolly

Never too late for thanks, Molly. : )
Congratulations on finding a home.

March 2, 2012 | Unregistered CommenterDrew

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