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Sep272010

Send me a postcard


Crater Lake National Park in Oregon

The world is full of words. Lately, I'm leaning to less. Inspired by haiku, tanka, and Lisa Janice Cohen, I wrote these postcard poems.


Driving Along the Umpqua

wind swirls memory as

river light shines to

disolve pain so

gnawing

sadness

can

sink

 

Crater Lake at 7,000 feet

deepest

bluest

distant

water without sound

 

Heading Back

miles to go

heavy-hearted

your hand in mine

all the way home

 

 

Reader Comments (3)

Beautiful. Just beautiful. Thank you so much for letting me know my postcards spoke to you. Yes. These small things.

September 28, 2010 | Unregistered CommenterLJCohen

You've caused my bones to remember their home.
Thank you for that.

Auburn

September 28, 2010 | Unregistered CommenterAuburn McCanta

Auburn and LJ -
Thanks for reading and responding. So nice to expand the reading-writing circle.

- drew

September 29, 2010 | Unregistered Commenterdrew

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